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Good morning everyone!Do you like NBA?which team do you like best?I like Cavaliers very much.The number of this team called Lebron james is my favorite basketball player.His basketball technology is so wonderful and he is the youngest MVP in all star games.People called him king!I like play basketball too I hope I can become a good basketball player like him one day That's all. Thanks for listening.

which team do you like best改：which team is your favorite?

basketball technology 改为:basketball skills

People called him king!call不用加ed
I like play basketball too 改为I also like playing basketball 或者I also like to play basketball.

I also like to play basketball and I hope I can become a good basketball player like him one day .

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Good morning everyone! Do you like the NBA? Which team do you like the best? I like the Cavaliers the most. One of its players, James Lebron, is my favorite basketball player. His basketball technique is wonderful and he is the youngest MVP in the all star games. People call him the king! I like playing basketball too. I hope I can become a good basketball player like him one day.

That's all. Thanks for listening.